By ARTHUR S. BRISBANE
In Sunday's column, I wrote about the obituaries in The New York Times. I didn't have space to bring a number of elements in so I would like to supplement the column with some additional stuff relating to obits, which I find to be one of the most interesting content elements in The Times.
Please read on for a brief discussion with Bill McDonald, the obituary editor, about advance obits, those pieces about the famous and influential that are prepared ahead of time. Also look for a Q & A with Tim Bullamore, an award-winning obituary writer with the Daily Telegraph in London. He offers comments on obits in The Times and the differences in the ways The Times and the British press handle obituaries.
Finally, I include a bit on dead pools and the people who follow obituaries with a surprisingly keen passion.
On advance obits:
I asked Mr. McDonald how the desk decides who should have one. He said it's an easy call:
“They essentially select themselves â€" high-profile people whose deaths will be major news and whose obits we'll want to publish immediately. When to write one is another matter. Here we tend to think like an actuary (as well as a journalist and an amateur historian), taking into account prominence and significance, of course, but also life expectancy, health status and risk factors. Someone prominent and old will be high on the to-do list; someone prominent and ailing is, too. Someone prominent and in a high-risk job may also deserve an advance. And some people are so prominent that we have to consider our own risks - of being caught off guard unprepared. Embarrassment-avoidance in a competitive environment is no small consideration.â€
I asked whether he and his colleagues are often stuck without one and think, in retrospect, why on earth didn't we have one for this person?
Mr. McDonald: “Well, I often wish we ha d been smart enough, or clairvoyant enough, to have an obit prepared in advance. But it's a cardinal rule on the Obits desk never to say, ‘Why didn't we have one on…..?' Outsiders freely say it, but we happy and embattled few know how hard, and how impossible, this job ultimately is. So you do not say that, ever.â€
I asked about some recent notables and whether The Times had them ready in advance.
Osama Bin Laden (yes)
Richard Holbrooke (yes)
Whitney Houston (no)
Mr. McDonald said The Times currently has 1,500 advance obits in the can â€" “and we're adding about 250 a year. Even if you subtract the number of those we'll publish in a given year â€" say, 50 â€" the archive is growing significantly.â€
But he declined to tell me who the youngest on the list is, saying it's “proprietary information.†About 90 percent of the obituaries that make the front page are prepared in advance.
Occasionally, the author of the obituary wa s already dead by the time the piece ran â€" Vincent Canby on Bob Hope and Mel Gussow on Elizabeth Taylor, for example.
Mr. McDonald said that in most cases when an obit subject outlives the writer, The Times does a new piece. “But in select cases,†he added, “we feel the obit is too fine to discard, particularly if it is by a writer who brings a certain authority to it.â€
The Times assigns a live body to update the obit and, in the case of Mel Gussow, offered a note to the reader acknowledging the status of the author.
Dead pools and obituary fans
Marilyn Johnson, the author of “The Dead Beat: Lost Souls, Lucky Stiffs and the Perverse Pleasures of Obituaries,†writes vididly about obits, obit writers and the surprisingly passionate tribe of obituary readers who patrol the internet in search of the newly-dead. These folk gather together in Usenet groups and on dead pool lists and all manner of morbid media channels.
Ms. Johnson told me: “They are obit fans. I don't know where they come from. I don't know why they are obsessed. It speaks to them. Maybe they were introduced to the page in a very emotional or traumatic or personal way and glommed onto it. They are almost gothic in their obsession. They post all the time. They have dead pools. They write rival obits. They pick bones.â€
Ms. Johnson referred me to a leader of their kind, Amelia Rosner, who works in advertising in New York and helps run a dead pool on alt.obituaries, a Usenet group where obit fans gather.
Don't know what a dead pool is? Then check out the links below and you soon will. Thanks to Ms. Rosner for providing this tip sheet for those who wish to be newly initiated into the world of the obituarians.
Find alt.obituaries here:
http://groups.google.com/group/alt.obituaries/topics
Here's a list of deadpools.
http://website-tools.net/google-keyword/word/celebrities+death+pool
Here's how to ge t up-to-the second news of deaths:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Recent_deaths
Here's a list obit fans use to keep track of who's next:
http://www.deathlist.net/
Interested in knowing why people like to play dead pools? The link below will give you a flavor of it. My favorite was from someone who said: “I got into the obit habit when I was a depressed teenager. I would read the celebrity obits to see if anyone famous died. Then when people asked me why I was so depressed I could say ‘I just found out so-and-so died' and they'd leave me alone.â€
https://groups.google.com/group/alt.obituaries/browse_frm/thread/443b8de0068e1c40/9f23881f3c08e2fe?hl=en&lnk=gst&q=why+do+you+like+obituaries#9f23881f3c08e2fe
Next up is Tim Bullamore, obituary writer for the Daily Telegraph in London, who answered my questions about obits here and across the pond.
What is your estimate of the current state of the obituary? Is this a golden era, the back s ide of a golden era or something else? And would your answer be different for British and American obituaries?
Like a lot of newspaper journalism on both sides of the Atlantic, the obituary as an art form is in peril because of financial constraints. The material is there â€" fascinating people are still dying, and their stories remain to be told â€" but it can take time and money to dig out their stories. It is tempting for newspapers to print a well-meaning but often one-sided or anodyne submission from family or friends of the deceased, rather than to secure a more objective piece from a professional obituary writer. Fortunately, I haven't noticed the New York Times doing this, but undoubtedly some newspapers, both in the UK and the US, have saved money in this manner. A decade ago there was an annual international obituary writers conference, usually held in New Mexico, that has now alas gone by the wayside. We must do what we can to protect and continue what has been a great quarter of a century for the art of obituary writing.
What I have termed the ‘postmodern obituary' â€" the one that gives a humorous and unfawning account of a life â€" arrived in the UK with a ‘big bang' in October 1986, with major structural changes to the British newspaper industry such as deunionisation, the collapse in newsprint prices and the introduction of new technology â€" as well as some imaginative individuals. The New York Times obituary tradition has, I understand, evolved more gradually. Small-town American obituaries can be dire â€" nobody could live a life as perfect as those described in some papers. Plus, some US papers almost make a virtue of ‘Ordinary Jo/Joe' obituaries. It's great to be less class-ridden in your obituaries than we here in the UK (where a title or an inherited estate unfortunately seem sometimes to be qualifications for an obituary), but Ordinary Jo/Joe is to the reader often just that â€" ordinary. And dull. As a writer I'm looking for a great story with which to entertain the reader, I'm not looking to do something good for a grieving family (though if I do that as well, I'm happy).
What is your assessment of NY Times obits: strengths, quirks, flaws, etc.?
I suspect The New York Times does not realise just how much its obituaries are read and appreciated worldwide. Many are true gems: fine writing by great writers. There are a good number of superb contributors, and it seems invidious to pick out one, but anything by Margalit Fox is worth reading. Her piece today on Antonio Tabucchi is excellent, for its anecdotes, its critical assessment and its historical context. If I may mention a competitor, Steve Miller at the Wall Street Journal, also does a fine job. I will be lecturing to journalism students at Columbia University, New York, in October on the subject of British obituaries and I will be fascinated to pick up their opinions of US obits.
The Portraits of G rief, miniature obits in the NYT in the aftermath of the 9/11 attacks, was a magnificent and highly emotional achievement. It was a wonderfully understated way in which one section of the newspaper could respond to the sheer horror of an event that was too ghastly to describe in words. I emulated the series in a small way for the London Times after the July 7, 2005, transport attacks here. Having researched and written all the London pieces myself, I later wrote a guide to writing ‘mass obituaries of ordinary people'. I pray that it will never be needed.
On the negative side, I find the obsession with cause of death in US obituaries to be irksome: they're dead, get over it; an obit is about life (I remember the LA Times, desperate to offer a cause of death, once stating “causes associated with agingâ€!). The insistence on attribution (the death was confirmed by XXX), which is of course proper journalistic practice, is another stumbling block to the smooth flow of copy. Readers should be able to trust their journalists to have made that call, without needing to see it in print. The extensive lists of survivors is worthy, but serves the family of the reader rather than the deceased; I often ask myself when reading a NYT obit ‘which anecdote or entertaining tale was excised to make space for a list of names of people of whom I have never heard?' They also often appear mid-piece, again an interruption to the flow.
In the NY Times in print, obits appear in the cracks between things. I understand that, in Britain, some papers offer full-page spreads, well-illustrated. Is there, do you think, a significant difference in the impact an obituary makes based on these presentation issues?
British newspapers are very different from US ones: they are sold across the whole country and are fiercely competitive. Furthermore, despite their declining print sales, there is still a sense of ‘if it's not in the paper it hasn't happen ed', meaning that British TV, radio and internet will often quote what the papers are saying. The same applies to the obituary pages of the four major ‘broadsheet' newspapers: The Times, the Daily Telegraph, The Guardian and The Independent. I specialise in writing classical musicians' obituaries for the Telegraph and both my editor and I are keen that my pieces appear before they are seen in any rival publications by rival writers â€" that way they are likely to be read out or referred to on BBC Radio 3 (the main national classical music station). The Times and Daily Telegraph pieces appear anonymously, which allows the writer great freedom â€" and responsibility â€" when assessing the life they are covering.
These four papers all have a dedicated section (usually a page or two) each day dedicated to obituaries, usually towards the back of the main paper. This recognises the obituary as a genre of writing in its own right. To my mind an obituary is NOT a news story: it may be worthy of a news story â€" who has died and how they died â€" in which case the News pages will run a paragraph or two. But the obituary is much, much more than a notification of death: it is the first attempt at a posthumous biography; it is an assessment of a life lived: with all the advantages and disadvantages that this person was born with, and with all the opportunities and difficulties that life threw at them, what did they make of their three score years and ten on this Earth? We confuse it with a News story at our peril.
A related question, I suppose, is whether you think obits do as well online as in print.
They can do. But as with all online news, the absence of a space limitation minimises the need for concise, tight writing and editing. There is also the temptation to publish online any and every death that is notified. An often-neglected role of an editor in the digital era is to select a diet of reading, both by subject and by lengt h, for his or her readers. Giving the reader anything and everything, and telling him or her to make a selection, is an abdication of responsibility on the part of the editor. At present the major UK papers and the NYT generally only put online what they also print. I hope it remains that way: sometimes less is more.
Finally, what should the ultimate aim of an obituary be?
To amuse, entertain and inspire the reader through the medium of quality writing with an account of a life well lived. If at the same time we can bring closure to the family, shine a light on a forgotten area of history, or frame an old story in a new way, then that is an added bonus.